Hey @marcbeinder. A warm welcome to the community and thanks for making your first post.
The compression on that TOH is great. It does feel like you’re missing some low and high frequencies in your final mix. A quick look inside Adobe Audition real-time frequencies confirms this:
Is there any way you can boost the bass and bring back frequencies above 15 kHz?
The first part with the voices sounds nice and on beat. I’d likely use a transition swoosh or sweep sound effect to move from the first part into the music and between the mixes to make the project flow.
Thanks for sharing this. It was a fun listen