Could you tell me if it sound good?
I would say that you still have some work to do. The recording quality of the voice is very poor and hardly audible. This definitely needs improvement. It’s also worth to work on the voice vs music balance. Music is too overpowering in the mix. Keep it up - this is a good start!
Hey, I appreciate the effort you put into your recording. However, I want to suggest that the quality of the recording isn’t the best, and it’s hard to hear your voice over the music. It might be worth considering getting a better microphone or reducing the bass frequencies around 250 Hz to help your voice stand out more. Keep practicing and trying new things - you’ve got this!